Young Writers Society

I absolutely love this! I can't wait to read the next parts. You used wonderful descriptions to accurately portray your characters and settings in a way that I could visualize ...

I think I understand this to be the log of a ship (I guess it's in the name) and I definitely want to know more of the background to this ...

I loved reading this. Your use of descriptive and vivid verbs and nouns brought it to life. The way you picture the crow is interesting. I just can't get over ...

I love this and it conveys such an important message that everyone needs to hear. You are beautiful the way you are, even though sometimes you might not feel like ...

I'm not really sure what I'm supposed to think about this poem. I'm not sure what the idea is supposed to be. Sounds like maybe death? Is it a personification ...

I think I understand the meaning of this poem as, "we're all just people." When we don't see each other's scars, skin color, untidiness, or all the things that might ...

Everything about this poem is true. There are so many noises and distractions in our society today. There are so many screens and reasons not to take time out of ...

I loved this story, and the prequel "The Spider Who Paid Rent." However, I can tell that this one was written without as much thought and consideration. It's a little ...

I think the idea for this was quite hilarious. I'm sure we've all seen memes and pictures making fun of people trying to take pictures of mirrors. Each attempt to ...

This poem definitely conveys a lot of spirituality. However, there are some parts of it that I don't understand. Now this is probably because I don't read poetry very often, ...

You did an amazing job conveying all of the emotion throughout the story. I was right there with Shira the whole time. I could feel every ounce of pain and ...