Ventomology

I will fix that typo as soon as I have computer access (and not just a teeny phone). As for the action... well. Thanks a bunch!

Thanks! You are correct about Martin and Drake, by the way. I look forward to hearing from you in the future!

Yeah... I've been wanting to rewrite this chapter since Thursday, but my family left for vacation that day. Sorry you had to read all those leaps of logic.

Yeah... I've been wanting to rewrite this chapter since Thursday, but my family left for vacation that day. Sorry you had to read all those leaps of logic.

How do I miss all these logic lapses? Thank you a thousand times for picking them out and continuing to review.

Yeah, this chapter may have some of the greatest (worst) leaps of logic I've ever written. I think I planned it without doing the proper research--first mistake right there--and then ...

It's not like, really late, but I feel like eight is too late to go out of the house.

Sometimes I read a piece of advice and I'm like: shouldn't I already know this? More than likely, I forgot to use words that are loaded with emotional connotation as ...

I've fixed the specific little things you pointed out. Thank you so much for continuing to review this piece!

At this point, I've really just accepted the fact that these later chapters are not as good as the earlier ones in terms of flow and comprehension, but I will ...

Honestly, the closer I get to the end with this story, the worse the writing seems to get. I think the action/description disjoint might be getting better in the later ...

But if science is a butt, that means you can kick it. Anyways, thank you so much for being willing to put in the time to review this story! There ...

Oh my gosh! This is your first review? Welcome to YWS then! I look forward to seeing you around the site in the future. Thanks for the compliments. If you ...

I seem to be having a lot of difficulty with placing setting details. Ugh. Thanks!

Thank you!