Ventomology

Heya! Stumbled across another of your works in the Green Room, so here I am. Same as with the last piece of yours that I reviewed, this really can be ...

Hey there! Great to see more of your work in this universe. I love how expansive you've made this setting and its characters. Now then, let's get into this. I ...

Hey there! I stumbled across this in the works by new users section. Welcome to YWS!! We're so excited to have you here. And wow! What a great start! I'll ...

Hahaha! What a fun modern fable! Since I'm guessing your goal was to teach a lesson about gossip and eavesdropping, I'd say mission accomplished. Great work. Now then, I'm going ...

Heeyyyyy here we are back again. ...I just wanna say, having danced actual ballroom-standard tango, that it is extremely funny to me that people think it's a sexy dance because ...

Heyy! Just stopping by for a quick revmo review. So I'll start out by seconding LuminescentAnt on their point that it is interesting that the two parties grow apart instead ...

Heyaaa! It's pretty unusual to see poetry in the green room for long, so thought I'd snap this up. You've picked a great topic, so let's dive in. I see ...

And we're back! I'm... trying to figure out what the point is really of this chapter. It feels like there are two things that you're trying to accomplish: 1) introduce ...

AT LAST THE REUNION. Maybe I'm forgetting things. (or maybe it's the five year gap) I feel like Carris and Gwyn were not close enough in the earliest chapters to ...

Lol Clandestine putting her foot in her mouth. At least this guy seems okay. Also your bbcode is showing. SO. Continuing from last time when I said I had feelings. ...

Full disclosure I did read 16.2 as well. I couldn't help it lol! It's great to be back to Clandestine and James. So... not gonna lie... I was really hoping ...

RIP girl. Riding a motorbike in a dress? I feel like Zeke should have warned her about that. ...That's for giggles. Dresses are cute and I wish I could wear ...

Hmmm. I really can't tell if Miles is genuinely pro-Sadoria or not, and I can't even tell if you want me to know or not. Mysteries mysteries. I try not ...

Eyyoo back at it again. The pacing of your writing here is actually fabulous. We got two full scenes, with very little skipping around or skipping over parts or having ...

Heya! Back again. I think at this point you're really finding your sense for prose fiction vs poetry, and where they fit together and where you have to make adjustments. ...