Ventomology

... This chapter leaves me feeling vaguely uncomfortable, and not in a what-is-Jonah-up-to way. I mean, I got that too, just... we'll discuss this later. Technical Comments: The thing about ...

I'm back! (Not... Bach, just back.) Let's get a move on, shall we? Technical Comments: I feel like there isn't enough emotion in this scene. Yes, you have adequately explained ...

Heyo Fox! As promised, I am here to [s]tear you from limb to limb[s] leave a review! Let's get down to business. Technical Comments: 1. While Hunter did a wonderful ...

Heyo! I am going to sit here and pretend I don't have a chapter of Conics to finish by tomorrow night, so get settled I guess? Technical Comments: 1. You ...

Hey yo! I'm back, and I am so glad tech week is over I have time for reviewing again! Let's get a move on, shall we? General Comments: 1. Your ...

Good day, kiddo! I am again here from the phone. Pit orchestra leaves me with copious down time, none of which is spent at home. Let's get this party started. ...

Hey yo! I'm reviewing from the phone today, so you'll have to pardon the general lack of formatting. Let's get down to business! General Comments: I know LMS is often ...

I should be studying physics. Am I studying physics? Of course not. Let's get down to business. I decided I didn't like the olive color so we'll just cycle through ...

Hey yo kid! I probably should catch up on reviewing Unorthodox at some point, but hey, this is probably more reflective of what you can do now. So, let's get ...

Hey hey! Wow, this was just a fascinating read. I'm sorry I didn't find this sooner. Let's get right down to business, shall we? 1. You're a brave soul, writing ...

Good afternoon! I hope you're having a lovely day. Just fyi, I did, in fact, read the other two chapters before reviewing this one, though I only glanced over the ...

Hello there! I'm finally returning to the review scene, and what better way to do it than to follow a story from the very beginning? Thanks for the opportunity! So ...

Yo! Let's see if I can actually catch up with reviewing this time. Nitpicking: Not a whole lot for me to say here, but at the end, I might suggest ...

Yo! I am now sixty-four reviews ahead of you. Better move quick, Hunter. Anyways, on with the review: Nitpicking: Upon seeing the trio, the two adults greeted each other 1. ...

Yo! Like the super awesome companion I am, I finally made it to the party what... twenty weeks late? Here goes: Details: None today! General Comments: 1. I'm not going ...