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Re: Chapter 1 (Balancing Act)
Heyo Fox! As promised, I am here to [s]tear you from limb to limb[s] leave a review! Let's get down to business. Technical Comments: 1. While Hunter did a wonderful ...
Tue Jul 11, 2017 12:11 am -
Re: Off Court - Chapter 1
Heyo! I am going to sit here and pretend I don't have a chapter of Conics to finish by tomorrow night, so get settled I guess? Technical Comments: 1. You ...
Sat Jul 08, 2017 9:31 pm -
Re: No Destination (Chapter 6: The Enemy of My Enemy is My [Temporary] Friend)
Hey yo! I'm back, and I am so glad tech week is over I have time for reviewing again! Let's get a move on, shall we? General Comments: 1. Your ...
Mon May 08, 2017 2:06 am -
Re: No Destination (Chapter 5: Too Soon of a Reunion)
Good day, kiddo! I am again here from the phone. Pit orchestra leaves me with copious down time, none of which is spent at home. Let's get this party started. ...
Fri Apr 21, 2017 3:11 pm -
Re: No Destination (Chapter 4: Words to Pave the Way)
Hey yo! I'm reviewing from the phone today, so you'll have to pardon the general lack of formatting. Let's get down to business! General Comments: I know LMS is often ...
Mon Apr 17, 2017 5:53 pm -
Re: No Destination (Chapter 3: Evident Problems)
I should be studying physics. Am I studying physics? Of course not. Let's get down to business. I decided I didn't like the olive color so we'll just cycle through ...
Thu Mar 23, 2017 2:49 am -
Re: No Destination (Chapter 2: Cain)
Hey yo kid! I probably should catch up on reviewing Unorthodox at some point, but hey, this is probably more reflective of what you can do now. So, let's get ...
Wed Mar 22, 2017 1:41 am -
Re: Feather [1]
Hey hey! Wow, this was just a fascinating read. I'm sorry I didn't find this sooner. Let's get right down to business, shall we? 1. You're a brave soul, writing ...
Sun Jan 29, 2017 1:09 am -
Re: Scolopendra chapter 3
Good afternoon! I hope you're having a lovely day. Just fyi, I did, in fact, read the other two chapters before reviewing this one, though I only glanced over the ...
Sun Jan 29, 2017 12:27 am -
Re: Hidden Entity - 1.1 - Argument
Hello there! I'm finally returning to the review scene, and what better way to do it than to follow a story from the very beginning? Thanks for the opportunity! So ...
Tue Jan 10, 2017 6:51 pm -
Re: Muster Heroes – Quicksave 15
Yo! Let's see if I can actually catch up with reviewing this time. Nitpicking: Not a whole lot for me to say here, but at the end, I might suggest ...
Sat Sep 17, 2016 5:49 pm -
Re: The Adventures of Darren Cassidy - Chapter Seven, Part Nine - Not so Great Expectations
Yo! I am now sixty-four reviews ahead of you. Better move quick, Hunter. Anyways, on with the review: Nitpicking: Upon seeing the trio, the two adults greeted each other 1. ...
Mon Jul 04, 2016 6:09 pm -
Re: Muster Heroes – QuickSave 14
Yo! Like the super awesome companion I am, I finally made it to the party what... twenty weeks late? Here goes: Details: None today! General Comments: 1. I'm not going ...
Fri Jul 01, 2016 11:47 pm -
Re: How the Marigold Lost It's Sun: Ch 3
Hello there! Now then, before I get on with the actual review, I have one small suggestion. You may want to up the rating on this piece. Considering that movies ...
Mon Jun 27, 2016 12:12 am -
Re: Adelantè (Chapters 2/3)
Hello there! Since I believe Eros covered most of the main points, I'll just point out some little details that could use a second glance. 1. While the first sentence ...
Sun Jun 26, 2016 5:19 pm
