Ventomology

Heyyyy! Sorry it took me like forever to get here. November was wild. December has also been wild. Holidays are exhausting. This'll be pretty short. The improvements are really easy ...

Sick cover, by the way. I don't think I ever really took a look at it. It's nice to see some Classic Carris again. And Gwyn! Standing up for herself! ...

Hiiiii Sorry it took me so long to come back! This fall has been exhausting haha. Actually everything is exhausting. But I got assigned a Saturday shift and had nothing ...

eyo whaddup I am here for some physics. (This is a lie I only like physics when velocity and acceleration are zero. I build buildings. Anyway.) So the first thing ...

Hi! I love the warehouse descriptions! Excellent job capturing the eeriness and the industrial vibe. The broken glass and exposed piping and the fact that the narration is peppered with ...

Heyyyy! Can I just say, I love this use of magic? Here? This one? The grid Mireya had drawn for them, marking lines between structural pillars, had manifested itself in ...

Me out here whispering to myself in public: "he's a major mage he's a major mage he's a major mage ahhhhh." Also? Love the comparison of Pia to a snake. ...

Hiya! I'm coming into this without having read the other sections, but hopefully I can still offer something useful. I'm going to focus in on the description of the ruins ...

Okay finally back. I had to stew for a while on this one. As always, I love the strategy and creativity that characters get to express in this magic system. ...

Heyy! Back for part 2. Now, I know you're rewriting things... but through reading this whole story so far, I feel like I still haven't been able to get a ...

Heya! Just so you know, I did read up on the previous parts, so I'm not coming in blind. Let's get this show on the road, shall we? This is ...

I'll be real with you... I still say it Jhe-mez. If I ever meet a real boy with this atrocious spelling, your novel will have ruined every interaction I ever ...

Hii! Back again. I'll start out by seconding Winny on the ostentatiousness of the school. You could definitely find ways to mention it more often. In fact, it may fit ...

Hii! Wow, what a take on space travel! Makes me never want to go up there, however beautiful this love story is. Let's get right into it. Big picture, I ...

HAHA the anime vibes. “I’m never washing them again.” I'm going to spin a little yarn here and suggest that it would be extremely cool if you have an unreliable ...