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Re: Agents Of Time: Chapter Ten; The master of the archives
It's me again! Maybe if I'm very good I will catch up haha. It's nice to see the characters having some real avenues for success in their mission now. Like, ...
Jul 6, 2026 -
Re: Agents of Time: Chapter Nine; The bakers daughter and the note.
Hi I'm back! GREAT twist in this chapter! I think it was appropriately foreshadowed in hindsight (the trapped scientist, anyone?), but not obvious, so great job! I would have liked ...
Jun 29, 2026 -
Re: Agents of Time: Chapter Eight; The plot fog
Hi hi! I noticed you were one of the other folks in LMS who was continuing a novel you'd already started, so I am here in solidarity. I did read ...
Jun 26, 2026 -
Re: The Fall - Chapter 10
Nooooo! I have known Tommy for one (1) day, but if anything happened to him... you know. 1. Anyway, I take back what I said about Sange and Benjamin not ...
Dec 23, 2025 -
Re: The Fall - Chapters 8-9
Hi!! Wow, this has been in the green room for nine months. I feel a little bad! I did go back and read through the previous chapters, but not the ...
Dec 22, 2025 -
Re: A World Made of Glass: Chapter 5: Heroes Assemble!
Hiya! Saw you still have multiple chapters in the green room, so I might as well finish what I started, eh? This one's a real doozy! Word of advice: you ...
Sep 10, 2024 -
Re: The Mental Group
Hey there! This is such a fun idea! I especially love that this is marked as a script when it could have been marked as a kind of poetry format. ...
Sep 9, 2024 -
Re: A World Made of Glass: Chapter 4: Paradox Frenzy
Hi Remy! Apologies in advance--I have not read the previous chapters of this work. Just trying to clean up the green room! Let's start things off with a couple of ...
Sep 9, 2024 -
Re: Lady Alberta and the Wedding Saboteur (Part 4)
OMG IT'S BACK! I saw this pop up on my "please write a review" thingy on the homepage and couldn't stay away. (Did you finish this up just for Canada ...
Jul 4, 2024 -
Re: Shadow's Rising Chapter 11 (part 1)
Hiii! So sorry it took forever for me to get here. My travel schedule has been disgusting. Let's jump in, shall we? While it's exciting to see the other dragonets ...
Jan 8, 2024 -
Re: Getting Your Life Together- Day 1: Intro/Realization
Hiya! Was cleaning out the green room and thought I'd give this one a go. Let's get into it: Like Icy, I think it would be really helpful to know ...
Jan 4, 2024 -
Re: Mango
Hey! What a fun read! I'll keep this short because Leya covered a lot of the stuff I thought of, so let's dive in. I love how playful and hopeful ...
Jan 4, 2024 -
Re: Planetbound: Chapter 1.1
Eyo whatup! You know, I wish I saw more sci-fi around this site! It's such a fun genre. On that topic, we're gonna talk about sci-fi world-building specifically. Let's go. ...
Jan 2, 2024 -
Re: Lady Alberta and the Wedding Saboteur (Part 3)
Hiiii! This came up on my 'you should go review this' thingy on the homepage and I raced over as soon as I saw it. I'm so excited you've finally ...
Dec 31, 2023 -
Re: Williwaw Chapter 35
Oh snap! Miles is in with the Black Bull's followers now! Admittedly, I'm still not sure what his motives really are. Let's get into it. I briefly touched on this ...
Dec 30, 2023
