VengefulReaper

Hey, just here to leave a quick review. This certainly was an action packed chapter. It's a rule of thumb in writing that if you want the reader's to hate ...

Hi, just here to leave a quick review. This chapter took on a very political vibe, exploring the political alignments of the ordinari and the deviants. It feels more and ...

Hi, just here to leave a quick review A good follow-up chapter overall and I think you did well wrapping up the fight that ended on a cliffhanger in the ...

Hi, just here to leave a quick review. Firstly, this is the best chapter so far, in my opinion. The conversation between Grandpa and Liam is brilliantly handled and really ...

Hi, just here to leave a quick review. Part 2 of this chapter was a very intriguing one. There's a lot of information dropped on Liam by Grandpa and it's ...

Hi, just here to leave a quick review. A great chapter for the backstory on Liam and his dad and how he became a Keeper of the Light despite his ...

Hi, just here to leave a quick review. So a very action-packed chapter to pick up from the last chapter. I absolutely love the chain deva and the fact that ...

Hey, just here to leave a quick review. Wow, you really like throwing us in the deep end here. I like that it's not completely unfamiliar where I am confused ...

Hey, just here to leave a quick review. Firstly, that's some chapter name you got there. Definitely a change from our opener 'discovery'. Now on to the chapter itself. I ...

Hey, just here to leave a quick review. I really like this chapter because of its world-building. It's something that is so vital in a fantasy novel and doing it ...

Hey, just here with a quick review. Well, that's a rather interesting way to start a novel. It certainly comes across as unexpected. This chapter just seems to ramp up ...

Hey, just here to drop a review. It's a great and somewhat unexpected choice to have a POV chapter for Tsuki. It's good to know that the 'beast' introduced in ...

Hey, I'm just here to leave some quick thoughts. So, I am officially 10 days late to this chapter (Vac work can be a pain) so I kinda had to ...

Hi, just here to drop a quick review. Firstly, you have used a lot of descriptive language which really helps paint a picture of the world the reader is in. ...

Hi, Just leaving a quick review. Firstly, the idea to intertwine the trip to the zoo and the first day of school was quite brilliant. It fits perfectly and you ...