Velvet0Alchemy

Good gravy, sugarplum. I think I like you. I didn't think it possible to fit that much sarcasm and so few f***s given in one page. This was thoroughly entertaining ...

I loved this show. I wasn't planning on doing any reviews today, but this grabbed me by the neck and dragged me into it. Curse you, curiosity! Watch your and's ...

This is amazing. You are a phenomenal author! I'm excited to know what happens next. I do have a few notes for you, though. In several places, throughout all three ...

This is so freaking awesome. It reminds me of Firefly. Frick yeah space smugglers. There's a handful of issues with your sentence structure. Some of them seem to run on, ...

Hey! Sorry it took me so long to get to this. ^^; First off, anything that starts off with faeries excites me. However, your descriptions are, well, boring. "He did ...

I'm not sure what's going on here. Something about a social revolution? It seems interesting, but it's hard to read. It seems almost like a lecture, and it's hard to ...

This is great. I've had a problem with the whole 'triggered' thing for a long time. If you watch/read something you don't like, oh fricking well. It's not porn, I ...

Lizards vs. people is an interesting idea. There's lots of potential there. However, at the beginning of the chapter, you're giving too much information. The bits about social media and ...

Very interesting! This promises to be an intriguing story! I love how you slowly described the scene, letting the action show the story and the people. I'm not sure I ...

Good gravy. I have no idea what's going on (as I have not read previous chapters), but my goodness. I'm interested. I need this. I have a few small issues ...

I love magic. I love how much potential is here. Let's start with the first paragraph. The description of the wand light is the first place I trip. The phrase ...

I love the imagery here. The timing seems a bit erratic and kind of distracts from the metaphor, and the last line leaves the reader wanting. It makes it hard ...