Vasha26

The concept you've got going here is a good one, with the contrast of dark and light and life's mix of the two. That being said, I agree it could ...

Yeeeeesss This is so great. It may be super short (not saying that negatively) but honestly there are still effective techniques that would stand out more clearly as positive choices ...

Ahahaha yes. Being a full time high school student, this makes me so happy. I agree with the suggestion of ChocolateCello that watching the tenses is key. Keeping an eye ...

I really enjoyed this. Your poem has excellent rhythm and flows very smoothly from one line to the next. This is very important for me as a reader personally, so ...

I agree with Sherri that the rhythm was a bit difficult to keep track of. However, I absolutely LOVED the imagery used in the latter half. The architectural theme meshed ...