Vapor

The deepth of this work is amazing. I love it. I also enjoy how it's so simple at the same time; just an aging women reflecting on life, or seemingly ...

That was great. It kept me hanging on my seat, kept me wanting to get to the next sentence. I didn't miss a word, which I haven't really been able ...

This is absolutely beautiful! The imagery and detail is astounding. I really do love this nice short story, but I also feel a little confused. There's a lot left up ...

I'll be honest I'm not into zombie films, or games. The closest to zombie I get is I Am Legend, which this reminds me a lot of. :) Anyway, I ...

Chapter 3! Yeah! Anyway, another good chapter for DF. I like the new twist, Mr. Sabre joining the gang. I didn't see that coming, but it's a good addition, I ...

This is a really good poem, I enjoyed it a lot, though it's a depressing matter. I just have a few questions about the wording I wanted to bring to ...

CHAPTER 2!!!! -happydance- I enjoyed this chapter just as much as the first one. My only complaint is, dang it why can't Pandora just come out and say she's Swan ...

Hello there! First off, I loved this. You set up the perfect story that is paced just right and keeps the reader readin' to find out some answers. I liked ...

Having a tendency to be cynical, I'm all over this story with a bit of a skeptical mindset, but also very well enjoying it. Overall, I liked it. I feel ...

All right, I'm not here to start any flaming, but I'm going to bounce SassyKat's critique. My turn to quote! I've got stresses up to here, Constant whispers in my ...

I like the subject of the poem, mostly because I think it's something we all can relate to at some point. But to me it's not to....I don't know flowing ...

I really enjoyed this so far! However, I have a few loose ends that need some tying up. The beginning starts with people severed to pieces--who killed them? I take ...

I just want to get this out there before I say anything else: this story is fantastic. I've always wanted to read a fantasy gamer story like this, and I ...

I really enjoy this!!! I have to admit, your writing style, though simply beautiful, is a little hard to follow. "My gaze dropped in front of me again. A ballad ...