Vanadis

Ah thanks, :) I will put it in the right place from now on once i find the place. Also thanks for the support people and for my first reviewer, ...

Thanks so much for all the comments! You guys ROCK, hardcore. All of you. Yes, I am definitely going to revise this. It's possibly the first (non-joking) poem I've written ...

Aw, don't take Hookfang, Freyja! I need him for the story! :lol: Thank you for the review. I did notice that I overused the word "small" in this piece. Ha ...

Very, very much improved. Good job, Olli! This time you seemed to have sorted out better what you wanted to say and delivered. The rhythm is better. Your punctuation is ...

I'm attempting to adapt my novel into a graphic novel for Screnzy. I'm Moosey-Fate on there, if anyone is interested in knowing that. Huzzah! I gotta wait another hour and ...

Yeah, I see. I'll fix that after the novel's done. Right now I'm sorta...trying to barrel through it. :S It's mostly his mind going completely nuts, anyway. But thanks! Speaking ...

Yeah, it was intentional lack of caps and punctuation. Thanks all for the good advice and the likes. And it's my second poem, really, but...same thing. :) I don't really ...

lol...now Squiggly...that's something. I'm glad you liked it. But as I said, we couldn't even call it alpha; we had to say "temperature coefficient of reactivity," or they made us ...

>.< Thanks for the reviews; I'm totally killing this and re-writing, so I'll keep you guys' comments in mind. Yeah, the "edge" thing, though...It's not a zone. It's the edge ...