Vampiress

Well, E means a little kid could read it without getting scared, lots of blood, scared about war. But yes, so far I agree it's E. Good story!! I like ...

I posted chapter 2.

Forgotten, Nothing wrong with the end,keep it. Please do. It's just and odd way to end of a story\chapter, in my opinion. It's just my opinion, if you like, keep ...

I'll give suggestions after I read the other parts because I don't like skipping. SO,brb!

Thanks, I'll work on chapter 2. You hellped me so much. :D

Thanks anyway.

About the talking to the reader, it's in her point of veiw and most people would think that. Thanks for the advice.

I'd really like it if you guys didn't read and go. Comment please even if it's tips, they are really helpful! Tell me what you think of it, if it's ...

Then, I will read it. ;D

I think you should rate this so people know who the audience is for. Just in case, for non-age appropriate things. =)

Whoa, calm down. If you want reviews, the best thing to do is to review other people. You'll get noticed a LOT easier. :P Anyway... there are a lot of ...

Please don't just read and don't leave comments. I'd like some advice! :elephant:

Do you guys like it?? :elephant: