VampireSenshi

I really liked this poem! I can relate to it, I'm like that a lot. I also like how there's a constant, subtle rhyme, which is what really gives it ...

Hey Rocky! Let me first say that I liked how this starts, it was a little hard to follow. But I'm pretty slow sometimes, so it might just be me. ...

Sorry, missed a button... -- I really like the Doctor and Doctor Who, I do think that you can give a little bit more detail into where they are and ...

I really enjoyed this chapter, i love the comment about monkeys... I for one enjoy books with humorous things like that. But i would have enjoyed more of a background ...

I really enjoyed this, i find that it adds more of a kick to it when you know how to play some of the various bits of music that you ...

I love this!!! Although i would enjoy a mor in depth description, but other than that... Awesome. I would like to this there is a sort of metaphor for anguish ...

I really enjoyed the concept of this. Sometimes i feel that i have this power, and then i realize i don't and i go cry in a corner. But that's ...

I love the concept of finding something old and magical in the farest reigons of an old place like an attic or basement. And then it leads to something more, ...

I agree with LeahWierd! This story is becoming increasingly better! And now we have a climax! Now we can get down to the action! That, i can't wait for! I ...

This was a very good story. I enjoyed the drama and the action, but could do with alittle more of an introduction. I dont know if you have posted the ...

I really liked this story, but i didn't get something. Are they wizards? Sorry if i didn't read attentivly enough to get the details but i didn't seem to be ...

I absolutly love the concept, but the grammer did need a little tweeking (But who am i to talk about grammer). I like the use of magic and magic words, ...

Wow, I can hardly put into words the way i feel about this story... Well maybe i can, it was interesting. Yes! Very, very, interesting... I struggled to get the ...

This story was very interesting. I enjoy the idea of angels guiding souls into the nest great beyond a good subject to write about... And this was a great example ...