UshertheThird

Hello! I enjoyed reading this poem. The entire idea of describing your imagination as a jungle is very interesting and well-done, especially the way you describe certain aspects of the ...

Hello MysteryMe, I really like this poem! The ending made me laugh, although I suppose the subject matter isn't really humorous. But the ending was so unexpected that it seemed ...

Hello! This is a captivating start here. It left me wanting to know more about Amber's story. The character seems to be well-developed, with a strong voice and back-story. The ...

Hello Silverlock! I really like this poem. The parallels it draws between the seasons and fire are things I had never noticed before, and they make the entire poem very ...

Hello NightWolf! This is a very good poem you have composed. It is well written, and I like the deliberate feel that the poem's flow and word choice create. The ...

Hello! I thoroughly enjoyed this poem. It flows very well, and the playful tone and word choice manage to evoke the movement and appearance of fire. The descriptions of fire ...