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I love how you you repeat "What has become of this land" and end with it. It just makes stresses the point, and lets you know what the poems about. ...

Very good. I liked it. All emotoins in life are just a distraction from the feeling of nothingness taht eareses them all. Or something like that. :D A little chilling, ...

Amazing. Every descriptive, and interesting. I really wanted to read the poem. A Twisted Paradise. Twisted for the inhabitinats. Paradise for whom? Very nice. Only a few mistakes. And this ...

That was a really fantastic piece. I liked it alot. A good rhythm, and a it flowed very nicely. What was your message in the poem. What were you trying ...