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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: When Atlas Fell // 1.1

    So, I read the parts of this backwards and I loved it. I swear I don't usually do that, of course but I saw the second part before this. You ...

    Jun 7, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: When Atlas Fell // 1.2

    First let me say that you have a very interesting writing style. I absolutely loved this. It was very well written and your characters seem very fleshed out. You obviously ...

    Jun 7, 2016
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Culture Re: Ghost Dialogue

    This is definitely a very interesting work. I like the way you began it but I did feel that it was a bit unfinished. Who are your characters? I felt ...

    Jun 7, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Teen Fiction Re: The Prophet's Curse

    Oh my goodness. This is really good. I really love the concept of what you have here and I love the character Nathaniel. He's easy to connect with which is ...

    Jun 7, 2016
  • Short Story » Narrative, Supernatural Re: Home

    First off, I absolutely love the imagery here. And that first line? I loved it. Reading this, I could picture myself there and it was wonderful. You took me somewhere ...

    Jun 7, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Realistic Re: Elodie Bones & The Stonewall Hounds: Chapter I

    Hello! Colly here! First off, you definitely have me hooked with your introduction and the description of the manor. I love stories about drafty old manors and stuff so I ...

    Jun 7, 2016
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Realistic Re: Give me Peace

    Okay. So this is probably one of the best poems I've read in a long time. It really, really got to me in ways that I totally didn't expect. It ...

    Feb 14, 2015
  • Short Story » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Slowly Drowning

    Hey there! Colly here for a review! :) Overall, I really did like this. It was kind of short and not very detailed, though. That's one of the only things ...

    Feb 14, 2015
  • Short Story » Literature, Literature Re: The Second Reason I left

    Hey there! :) This was a really interesting read. I loved the voice of the story. It was...unique in a good way. I noticed that, the first time you mention ...

    Jan 27, 2015
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, Fantasy Re: Dwarves of Pompeii (Edited)

    Hey there! I really, really liked this. It was really fun to read and I loved your description of things. However, I was disappointed that you didn't describe to us ...

    Jan 27, 2015
  • Short Story » General, Dramatic Re: Regretful nights

    Hey there! I loved this story. You got me hooked from the very first line. I wanted to know who this person was and what her story was. You delivered ...

    Jan 23, 2015


You got rid of them. Yes, that's just like you. Getting rid of everything unpleasant instead of learning to put up with it.
— Aldous Huxley, Brave New World