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Re: When Atlas Fell // 1.1
So, I read the parts of this backwards and I loved it. I swear I don't usually do that, of course but I saw the second part before this. You ...
Jun 7, 2016 -
Re: When Atlas Fell // 1.2
First let me say that you have a very interesting writing style. I absolutely loved this. It was very well written and your characters seem very fleshed out. You obviously ...
Jun 7, 2016 -
Re: Ghost Dialogue
This is definitely a very interesting work. I like the way you began it but I did feel that it was a bit unfinished. Who are your characters? I felt ...
Jun 7, 2016 -
Re: The Prophet's Curse
Oh my goodness. This is really good. I really love the concept of what you have here and I love the character Nathaniel. He's easy to connect with which is ...
Jun 7, 2016 -
Re: Home
First off, I absolutely love the imagery here. And that first line? I loved it. Reading this, I could picture myself there and it was wonderful. You took me somewhere ...
Jun 7, 2016 -
Re: Elodie Bones & The Stonewall Hounds: Chapter I
Hello! Colly here! First off, you definitely have me hooked with your introduction and the description of the manor. I love stories about drafty old manors and stuff so I ...
Jun 7, 2016 -
Re: Give me Peace
Okay. So this is probably one of the best poems I've read in a long time. It really, really got to me in ways that I totally didn't expect. It ...
Feb 14, 2015 -
Re: Slowly Drowning
Hey there! Colly here for a review! :) Overall, I really did like this. It was kind of short and not very detailed, though. That's one of the only things ...
Feb 14, 2015 -
Re: The Second Reason I left
Hey there! :) This was a really interesting read. I loved the voice of the story. It was...unique in a good way. I noticed that, the first time you mention ...
Jan 27, 2015 -
Re: Dwarves of Pompeii (Edited)
Hey there! I really, really liked this. It was really fun to read and I loved your description of things. However, I was disappointed that you didn't describe to us ...
Jan 27, 2015 -
Re: Regretful nights
Hey there! I loved this story. You got me hooked from the very first line. I wanted to know who this person was and what her story was. You delivered ...
Jan 23, 2015
