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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: When Atlas Fell // 1.1

    So, I read the parts of this backwards and I loved it. I swear I don't usually do that, of course but I saw the second part before this. You ...

    Jun 7, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: When Atlas Fell // 1.2

    First let me say that you have a very interesting writing style. I absolutely loved this. It was very well written and your characters seem very fleshed out. You obviously ...

    Jun 7, 2016
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Culture Re: Ghost Dialogue

    This is definitely a very interesting work. I like the way you began it but I did feel that it was a bit unfinished. Who are your characters? I felt ...

    Jun 7, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Teen Fiction Re: The Prophet's Curse

    Oh my goodness. This is really good. I really love the concept of what you have here and I love the character Nathaniel. He's easy to connect with which is ...

    Jun 7, 2016
  • Short Story » Narrative, Supernatural Re: Home

    First off, I absolutely love the imagery here. And that first line? I loved it. Reading this, I could picture myself there and it was wonderful. You took me somewhere ...

    Jun 7, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Realistic Re: Elodie Bones & The Stonewall Hounds: Chapter I

    Hello! Colly here! First off, you definitely have me hooked with your introduction and the description of the manor. I love stories about drafty old manors and stuff so I ...

    Jun 7, 2016
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Realistic Re: Give me Peace

    Okay. So this is probably one of the best poems I've read in a long time. It really, really got to me in ways that I totally didn't expect. It ...

    Feb 14, 2015
  • Short Story » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Slowly Drowning

    Hey there! Colly here for a review! :) Overall, I really did like this. It was kind of short and not very detailed, though. That's one of the only things ...

    Feb 14, 2015
  • Short Story » Literature, Literature Re: The Second Reason I left

    Hey there! :) This was a really interesting read. I loved the voice of the story. It was...unique in a good way. I noticed that, the first time you mention ...

    Jan 27, 2015
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, Fantasy Re: Dwarves of Pompeii (Edited)

    Hey there! I really, really liked this. It was really fun to read and I loved your description of things. However, I was disappointed that you didn't describe to us ...

    Jan 27, 2015
  • Short Story » General, Dramatic Re: Regretful nights

    Hey there! I loved this story. You got me hooked from the very first line. I wanted to know who this person was and what her story was. You delivered ...

    Jan 23, 2015


How odd I can have all this inside me and to you it’s just words.
— David Foster Wallace