UnicornNerd

Hey guys! ThAnks for all the reviews! I took them into consideration and fixed it up. I also added a third chapter! I hope you guys enjoy it, it took ...

Thanks for the reviews guys! they really helped and I took the into consideration when I re wrote it. They helped it alot. Thank you for helping me with this. ...

This was a compelling story. the ending is good, perfect for a prologue in a murder mystery. The only thing confusing was weather she killed herself of the rapist killed ...

Thanks for all the imput guys! It helps alot!

Hilarious. Nuff. Said.

Wow. This was chilling and was compelling. I liked your description and you plot. A very good short story. You should write another short story, a prequel. about how he ...

Very sad!!! It almost mad rme cry, and it takes alot to do that. It was really good and you should keep writing!

"Cute!!! Loved it :) that's all I gotta say

Awww, thanks. I'm working on it :)

Thanks for reviewing, firt of all. Second of all, it's not the girl who grabs him. It's the men in white coats. Read the next chapter. I'm working on it. ...

Although I don't normally like space stories, this one was very interesting. I loved your decriptions! They were really vivid and beautifully worded. I thought your excicution was fine, if ...

This was very interesting and kept mr glued to the page the entire time. Well done. I hope I see more of it. I think I'll check out your novel.

The ending made me read it over about five times. I thought he liked her!! It was a cool ending, nevertheless. Anyways, I can relate to this story because one ...

Two words. Loved. It. It was easy to relate to, and wonderfully sarcastic. It was very realistic, exactly how a normal teenage girl would think. Brilliant.

Absolutely amazing. It's simple, yet complex. It's completely true and I am sure that almost everyone can relate to it. I love it!