Unfunnyguy1998

This was beautiful. I loved the last stanza especially. It was very powerful, and I liked how you coupled the favorite color being blue with the father looking up at ...

I like the idea of the poem. How the ignorance of the child hurts her. The repetition of the "oww little one" shows that she is hurt by child. I ...

Great poem. I don't really have much to say in terms of a review. I would like to say that on Mondays maybe not you but I'm pretty much sad ...

The concept of your poem is beautiful. How most people believe that when they find love that their lives are contorted around this until they can make it work. The ...

I found that the whole message was beautiful. But I'm confused was the woman in the poem an old woman or a woman with dead friends. I know age is ...