Ulysses

Thanks a lot for the tips and love....Prophecy of a Prodigy is a recurring statement in my poetry and mainly my lyrics. It's just a phrase I started using to ...

I need nit picky I never had a teacher or a mentor I just had to figure out how to write on my own. Thank you for your review on ...

Thanks a lot red hood I'll take this back to the drawing board and apply what you've said. You're right the sudden transition from negative to the prayer seems misproportioned

I understand now, thanks for making sense of that. I love that poem.

Thanks Steggy this one isn't finished but I have a lot of feedback that will help me write it better. Thanks for your feedback

Damn I like that idea with trait I possess, thanks Falco. That is definitely one of my weaker poems, I normally write lyrics so I'm still learning to do poetry. ...

Thanks a lot I'll edit it based on your feedback and hopefully it will be better.

That is a highly emotional piece of poetry that obviously comes directly from the deepest part of your heart and the most intimate corners of your soul. I assume that ...

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I agree the imagery and the metaphors are extremely complex I had to read it a few times. Keep it up

That's some awesome free verse, I like how the concept you are conveying is proven true, at least in my life.