TylynRae

This piece was phenomenal... It had me from the beginning to the end. The impact you had with your words... At first for me, it started out soft, and by ...

I absolutely loved this. Its really great to be able to look into other cultures and see what kinds of things they do and believe in. I had never really ...

This is really good. So much emotion... I don't have anything negative to say about it. The writing was clean, I didn't see any grammatical errors or any punctuation errors ...

Three nitpicks. 1. Your title should be capitalized. Friends Everywhere. 2. I used to center my poems... until one of my teachers said that you're a lot better off having ...

Bahahaha, I absolutely loved this! Its like something I could have read out of Where The Sidewalk Ends, extremely cute and just extremely funny =] The flow was great, I ...

Yaaaay =] This made me smile. I agree with absolutely all of it, and your humour is brilliant. =] I especially agree with getting rid of the males of the ...

Might i say before I review this that I love you. Yeah. Thats right. Van Gogh is sort of my hero. So this piece really caught my eye =] I ...

Heyy buddy =] I thought this was lovely, absolutely spectacular. I absolutley love your descriptions and the willowy fingers was actually one of my favorite lines, don't mean to disagree ...

Our feet were dancing on the surface of the water, until we finally dared to take the leap and fall down fully. We shivered when the cold embraced us. Then ...

I really liked this piece, it meant a lot to me and probably to a lot of other people. The term the same doesn't feel the same really came to ...

Hey there snickers =] I really enjoyed this piece, I think the imagery was amazing. I had a bit of trouble with the rhythm for a minute, but I found ...

Gah, WT, this is amazing! I really got into the whole thing. The imagery in here was great. I found myself focusing on this hand, rolling a coin back and ...

Oh goodness. This is lovely. I can't say too much about it, cause they're isn't much there, but I think thats what really makes this piece. It exemplifies the 'modesty' ...

I thought that this was really lovely. You're writing style is really unique and leaves the reader grasping for meaning. I don't know how you meant it to be... but ...

Sooo, Percy, sort of jealous of your talent, not going to lie. =] This piece was really moving, and I liked how you didn't capitalize much, though that usually drives ...