TylynRae

Hi, again. I'm pretty sure petty found most of the grammatical errors. I really liked this bit because we got a really good description of your supporting character, but we ...

Hi there =] I stumbled upon this and then saw that you'd been asking for someone to review your stuff. I'm in the same boat =] But anyway. I really ...

Um... I didn't understand this. At all. The reason being that many words were incorrect and it was so short that I was just baffled by all of it. Maybe ...

This really caught my attention because I have a short story of the same title =] But anyway, I really enjoyed this. Its cool to see how you can have ...

Bahaha, this was really funny =] I really like the humour in it and how easily it flowed. You kept it close enough to the story that we know exactly ...

After deciphering the meaning of Deus Ex Machina, I read the poem and attempted to interpret it in some way. all of it seemed to make sense to me except ...

Hey there =] I found this and thought I'd give you a review. So, the first stanza starts of really strong. You've improved so much since you first started working ...

Hello there =] What I found really interesting about this piece is that just yesterday I watched this show called Circus, (actually I watched numerous hours of it =]) But ...

I really liked the idea of this poem. I would have portrayed it slightly different. The rhythm seemed to be a bit off. The first two lines hinted that it ...

I do believe this is one of the reasons I started following you in the first place. You have such cryptic stanzas that could leave readers guessing and interpreting for ...

This was crazy. Sort of the ultimate mind testness. I dunno why, it just seemed really trippy to me lol. But this was really neat, I loved how you described ...

I think this was my very first piece of poetry where not having that short poetic structure really made the piece. I mean, there is structure, rhyme and reason, but ...

I loved this. A lot. I especially like the part where you're talking about a girl spilling out her thoughts and being able to talk all day, but really never ...

Hey there! I think you have a nice piece here. Its a bit short, which is totally okay. I had a few iffs with this piece. One was that the ...

You have a really good idea with this. There are so many times in peoples lives where they really just wish they can take everything back... they wish they can ...