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Cor, now why... is he... what does.... how is it....? :shock: Lumme, this is worse than the last cliffhanger!

:lol: Very funny. What's to come, mewonders?

Second Part: Little warning bells started going off when I read this: Sitting back, Morthin let his head fall to gaze out of the eastern window. The sunlight seemed to ...

*blinkcoughcoughlooksaway* Cut the erm... erotic stuff, or I can't crit. Take that out, and this was good carrying on of action and all. Sorry, this wasn't very helpful, but... well, ...

Funny, but... abusive. Bad language and all puts me off.

Ew, this was *blanches* nasty. Freaky. Disturbing. Nasty. *gulp* No grammer nitpickings noted here. Why is all this happening, though? That's what I want to know; I suppose it'll be ...

I don't like Bible fanfics (DUH), but this was well written and all. Kitty did the nitpick as always. :)

Nice. Purt booflies! I liked it, but the crash bang boom, goodbye butterflies was abrupt. Where'd the butterflies go?

Thank you for reviewing, sokool! As to the title, "Warp and Woof" refers to past and present interweaving over each other to make up Time. Like in cloth, the warp ...

Chapter Two: Double Take "Yes I am," the boy exclaimed. "I'm Sherringford Holmes. How did you know?" "Your... no, never mind, I'll show you. C'mon." "Where?" Sherringford asked suspiciously. "I ...

Yeah, good. Dreamer got the typo.

But you still can't... PLEASE change it! You'll get accused of plagiarism... Ok, you won't, but maybe you could use another title? "The Leader"? "The One"? "The Teacher"? I don't ...

S'arite. "Murtagh, how could you?" sounds too maudlin. Make the emotion here stronger.

ROFL and LOL; and I mean the last one quite realistically. :lol: We're a "cult"? *splutters, sniggers and bursts appendix laughing*

Hehe, very funny! Parodies dont have to be strictly grammatical! :D