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Why the emphasis on "over thirteen"?

Chapter Five: The Flower Fadeth The room we were kept in had only one window. It was very small and high up in the wall, and only a small bit ...

How conceited is this???? Only you could write something like this, Sureal, and get away with it. ^_~ "An Ode To Me"... LOL.

Pretty cool! :) I've never had trouble like this, being safely brown haired, but it was well writ and all.

Oh MAN, fishr you are like the bestest writer on this whole site! If i could rite as well as u id be so proud! r u gonna get this ...

*blinks* *stares* *snorts* ROFL! Very funny, but the bits wHerE yOu MIx Up YoUR cApiTaLS and stuff makes it a bit tricky to understand.

Sheesh... :roll: You do a bloke a favour, and they say they don't need your help, thank you very much, and really I can tell myself how I can improve ...

Chapter Four: The Worst of Times It should have been raining, with heavy, lowering clouds dropping buckets of rain and soaking everyone and everything in sight. This would have matched ...

WHEEEEEE!!! Luverly!! And so nice - now Karenna's fitting in, and... wheee!! Nitpick? Well... The word exploded into CavernLights and Cerreno, who had screamed it, dropped to his knees next ...

Ok, I THINK I got this poem... I liked the stuff in bold, shows that the names mean something.

Better. :D You want a title? I'll try to think of one for ya!

As a wild off the wall idea, have you ever thought about writing about Kit as an adult as a sort of successor to Holmes? :thud: Kit as an adult ...

I like Fiver best. And Hazel. You really ought to see Martin Rosen's Watership Down, alleycat, it's great. All of it's on YouTube, so you can see it there.

She's like a guitar string that needs tuning; when you strum it, it sends off a wrong note. Richard's harmed her so she's out of tune from what she was ...

Oh, I like this new race you've introduced. Sk'iri. Nice, I like wings. :) FIRST BIT After she had her child, Jonahn gave both mother and baby (a little girl) ...