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Sorry, again, for the wait!!! *bows* To start off, I'd like to say that again, this chapter has surpassed the previous ones with its narration and humor. I really like ...

Hi, I noticed this had no reviews and then realized that I'm also one of the reviewers. This was a pretty neat chapter. The starting line was a thought yet ...

Hey! I'm gonna try my best not to disappoint you with this little review. First of all, it all started with a big blurry picture shrouded by all sorts of ...

Hi. I'm gonna start by saying that this was a very beautifully written piece. It was sad yet the beauty was portrayed through the never ending love of Alex for ...

Hi, Twinkle here to review. I have to say you have created quite an atmosphere from the very beginning of the story. The hidden mysteries of the old mansion, it ...

Wow, I have to admit, this is the first time I've ever read a story in which the character and the writer actually interact. This was quite fun. Your way ...

Hey! Nice chapter. I could sense the intensity of your characters' emotions. It has become even more intense. The best part about the whole chapter is Alex. The way you ...

Alright! That's what I'm talking about!! :D Uhm.. I mean, I really think this is what I meant when I said I knew you could do a lot better in ...

Hey, I see you're working on a new novel. I have to tell you that you've improved since you last posted your work which is quite hard to believe. It ...

Hi. No wonder I was confused about episode 5. Now things are finally clear to me. I think it's going pretty good and like I've said before, your way of ...

Alrighty then, I'm here to review. First of all, I should start by saying that there were a few places where you accidentally changed to past tense. Putting that aside, ...

hey, It's twinkle here to review. I am so glad you didn't stop it at the last chapter. this is pretty amazing and confusing too. what I don't like is ...

Hi, here to review. I would start off by saying that I really like the worlds you've created here. Such massive amount of imagination you've got there and you added ...

Hi, here to review this awesome piece of horror. I really like how you've narrated with the perfect balance of show and tell. A perfect way to make a horror ...

I think even if it was long, there were really cool dialogues and brother sister brother moments and it was all so beautiful, and kept me glued no matter what. ...