TwinSeed

I love the passion and intensity of it, and how you seemed to change your mind towards the end; specifically, the last two stanzas. Also, the rhyme scheme of your ...

It was very repetitive because of how often you rhymed with the same sound, and that made dulled the story a little for me. I like your use of imagery ...

Thank you, it's always nice to hear words of encouragement.

I see what you're saying, and I know exactly what you mean by this being "wishywashy". This was just something that popped into my head the other day, and after ...