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Turtles514

  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Science Fiction Re: Stolen Secrets: Chapter 1 Part 1

    Thank you for analyzing my writing it is extremely helpful because I don't have any experience with this sort of thing since I'm only in the 8th grade. Also I ...

    Aug 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Horror, Realistic Re: The Gloom

    Aug 28, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Mixing Magic: Chapter 2 Part 2

    Even though I haven't read the first part to chapter 2 or chapter 1 this is still an interesting story but be careful that you don't say "said" to much ...

    Aug 28, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: Reunion

    I like it sort of

    Aug 28, 2016
  • Other » Review, Humor Re: Divergent- A poetic diatribe.

    good job venting

    Aug 28, 2016
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Night of the Black Moon

    I enjoyed this short story at first I thought it wasn't going to be any good but then you caught my attention so good job.

    Aug 28, 2016
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Night of the Black Moon

    I enjoyed this short story at first I thought it wasn't going to be any good but then you caught my attention so good job.

    Aug 28, 2016


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