User avatar

TurquoiseLion

TurquoiseLion

  • Poetry » General, General Re: Where I'm From (for class)

    Wonderful! This reminds me of my hometown (New York City) and the beauty in the mundane. We can’t all live in Hawaii. I can see that office- it looks like ...

    Dec 10, 2014
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Humor Re: A Trip to an Amusement Park (X-Men One-Shot)

    That’s excellent! I don’t actually understand X-Men stuff, so I can’t tell if your style fits the fandom, but it’s funny and overall great. Unless it is customary in the ...

    Dec 10, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Best Friends Forever

    I love this! It’s adorably random; not the kind of thing my friends and I would make up, but that’s a good thing :3 . Lots of cute comparisons- I ...

    Dec 10, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, Humor Re: Being A Writer

    This is an excellent story! I usually don’t find myself enjoying humor. This I enjoyed immensely. You’re right about the fans begging for this or for that. The postman at ...

    Aug 20, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: To the Ellipsis

    Excellently written. It’s a little confusing… my subconcious knows what you’re saying, but my concious mind doesn’t… However, this speaks to me anyway. It’s beautiful. My favorite line- â€

    Aug 20, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: When I was younger, I read fairytales

    This is an excellent poem. It’s well written and has a pretty unique idea. I was never a fan of Disney movies- I preferred children's classics- but this speaks to ...

    Aug 20, 2014
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Teen Fiction Re: Excrutiating Agony

    I’m really impressed by this. So rare to find a poem both sad and well-written among the thousands of “I am sad. Sad is me. There is nothing but sadness ...

    Aug 20, 2014
  • Script » General, General Re: Return of the King (sort of)

    "SAM Andy, I think [you’re] taking this Gollum thing a little too far. GOLLUM What’s Andy, precious?" --- I started laughing so hard at that I thought I was gonna ...

    Aug 20, 2014


The thing about plummeting downhill at fifty miles an hour on a snack platter - if you realize it's a bad idea when you're halfway down, it's too late.
— Rick Riordan, The Son of Neptune