Truth

Hello I'm Truth I will be reviewing your poem "Apple", Pros: I love the similes you use and the analogies. Very vivid at least for me. Cons: Your take on ...

I like the vividness of it but it lacks taste.The set is a bit slow to doesnt seem to pop really. You dont introduce the main character

Thank you, your help is deeply appriciated. :)

True a review can be harsh but criticism can actully help

Well that was pretty. Yet it dont seem to be vivid and the format is wron but I cant say to much I cant write haikus.

my god this is a work of art truly it is i have now words for this.

Thank you it means so much to me that you reviewed my work.

Thank you i will work on that.

thank you for your kind words

Good good. and great concept

Thank you for your kind words

Great it was very vivid and very interesting. Good job. The topic was great and a very hard one to put in this P.O.V and is a personal favorite of ...

its too short a poem should flow from you mind into the penceil try to understand the words as you write them from a different p.o.v