Trinity

i liked this poem i think it was very well writen

1st of all this poem isn't about me 2nd of all i wrote this poem when i was about 11 and 3rd of all i know i have to change ...

i like it i ecspressed alot of emotion and i can relate just like i sure pritty much every one and i also have poems like that i just never ...

i like it i Agree with laundrette about the 1st and 2nd stanza i really injoyed it and can't wait to read more of you're poems

for niteowl "it" is a piano

i liked it but it confusedme just a little bit i found sopmespelling errors but you could still understand what was being said and you're play just flowed together perfectly ...

for itto be a poemit doesnt all ways have to rhym some poems never have 1 rhym so it doesn't all ways have to rhym

the poem sounded to dramatic, i didn't like it very much but over allit really tells what happens when you and other people make misakes

iliked the poem

I loved it i thought that itwas right to the point and you got your point across this poem was touching and i understood it it was agreat poem and ...

it was good but i really didn't understand it what is it saposed to be about?

i thought that you're poem was very nice and also you repeated yourself alot no afence

I liked the second stanza