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Thank you again! I was a little sad to see the italicised bit go, but the story's changed so much since I started writing that it didn't work any more. ...

Thanks for the review. 'Liugene'. I like it.

Good to see you again! XD Thanks for the review!

:) Thanks for reading!

Thank you for the review! I'll definitely keep you in the look when I work on rewriting/expanding. Not sure whether I'll be posting on YWS, but I'll decide on that ...

Thank you! Gah, feel a bit silly about that typo. *fixes it* Hope you have a good breakfast! :D

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Thanks and you're welcome! XD

Yay! Glad you like it :-) . All the stuff you've pointed out really helps - it's the kind of things that I needed a heads up about for my ...

Thank you! :) Appreciate the feedback!

Thanks for the review! This is the only edited version I have of this story (it exists because after posting the original part one I changed some of the dialogue. ...

Thank you! :) It's weird, I think the not using said comes from a teacher who, when we were doing creative writing in English in year seven, really stressed the ...

Huh, I knew Stella was a name, but I didn't know it was from Latin. Makes sense, I suppose :-) Considering I don't know a word of Portuguese, I didn't ...

No worries. The disconnectedness was more of a potential problem, it could happen, but it hopefull won't ! :-)

Thank yoooou! Stay tuned for the expulsion thing, is all I'll say. :) The Freddie phone call part is something I've come to be a bit iffy about... I need ...