TriSARAHtops

Hi there! I quite enjoyed your piece. I reckon that there's room for improvement, but you've got a good, solid foundation for a great story. It needs editing, but as ...

Hi there! This piece was well written, and I though that your character was pretty well developed. Inadmired the fact that you were able to include names of Roman weapons, ...

Hi there! Thanks for letting me know you'd posted this, because I'm quite intrigued by this story. I think that this felt a little like a filler chapter, however I ...

Hi there! The writing of this piece was very strong - good use of language, and even in this short amount of time there is good characterisation present. Ufortunately, though, ...

I'm going to begin by saying that I have nothing to complain about when it comes to this part of the story. I didn't spot a single thing to nitpick ...

Again, I loved reading this, and I plan on reading part 4 as soon as I finish reviewing this. I think, maybe, I enjoyed the earlier installments slightly more than ...

Yet again, awesome. The quality of this is absolutely brilliant, and it's a joy to read. The format of this works really well - it almost feels like a separate ...

Hi there! Wow, I really enjoyed this. You've managed to create an absolutely brilliant character in a very small amount of time, and I believed every word of it - ...

Hello! TriSARAHtops here to review! I quite liked this. You've created an interesting plot, with an excellent amount of suspense. Your writing style feels really suited to the genre, and ...

This was a pretty good start to what sounds like an interesting story. You've managed to begin giving your main character a voice and personality, and you've started hinting at ...

Hi there! I really, really loved reading this. It feels really original, and your use of the second person is fantastic. I can't wait to see where you take this! ...

I quite enjoyed reading this. You've created an interesting plot, and the diary format can be a good way for the reader to connect with the character. I quite liked ...

Hi there! This was something interesting. It was short but sweet, and had a nice eeriness to it. Your use of language here is very good, and for such a ...

Hello! Wow, that was pretty awesome. I really enjoyed reading it, and although it contained a lot of high-fantasy elements, it felt really original. In the first chapter alone, your ...

Hello! I really enjoyed reading this piece, and am intrigued as to what happens next. There's a almost floaty quality to your writing in some points through this prologue, which ...