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  • Poetry » Other, General Re: I shalt not mourn.

    ^^ Thank you!

    Mar 1, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Error 401

    Now I'm jealous. You got a review from Nate. You truly must be Superman. You have no idea how special I feel *satisfied purr*.

    Feb 28, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Bedside Angel

    Would it be weird to describe this poem as poetic? It was, I thought it had a nice flow and rhythm about it. I had to read it a couple ...

    Feb 3, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Error 401

    ^_^ 401 - Failure to authenticate to server. I thought maybe my connection had timed out, but it appeared to be my university's fault for timing out my connection just ...

    Feb 2, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Error 401

    Y'all are hating on clichés, huh? Yes, it is indeed a very overused phrase, but it seemed the only appropriate phrase with some form of meaning behind it. The first ...

    Feb 1, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Stars

    oo-er. Sorry Zan! xD Didn't notice your review til after the 14th edit! Been busy working on the structure, because I knew the rhythm was awfully shakey to begin with, ...

    Jan 29, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Bedside Angel

    Thanks for the additional feedback. Warrior Princess - I have decided to remove those lines for those reasons. You were absolutely spot on. Thanks again. Does anyone think I could ...

    Jan 26, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Bedside Angel

    Thank you both. In response to you, DragonLADY (nice name, by the way), the word 'beck' is as I wrote, as a common short form of 'beckon', or in this ...

    Jan 6, 2011


Writing is the geometry of the soul.
— Plato