Tranquility

Do you know how long it takes to read twenty one chapters all in one go when after every one you have to click back and then find the next ...

I love it :) really. I was a bit confused with the amount of times she got hurt? Was it once when whe dropped her camera or again while she ...

hey :) Just read the whole novel and apart from a few small issues I loved it! I especially love how you build up the characters and you do descriptive ...

Hi :) I actually really liked your poem, I understand what you mean when you say it is a bit melodramatic but it seems to work. The imagery is stunning ...

Wow. Its like one of those terribly sad but undeniably good stories you read and feel guilty at how relatively happy your life is. There were a few flaws sure, ...

Quick reply: saw your name (Harry Potter does rock!), and saw the word Tranquility in your poem, you had an unfair advantage before I even got into it. :) I ...

Hi :) I am here to comment on your amazing poem and give what I hope will be helpful advice. I loved it. Beautiful. The overall image I got from ...

QUICK REPLY= I loved it, beautiful and intense images, you spelt "losing" as "loosing" once so check that, favourite line was definitely "But the vision shattered, its splinters stabbed his ...

Hi :) OK I'm going to start with, I haven't read any of your previous works and yet I was still drawn into the characters and wanted to know more ...

Hi! :) Great imagery, it's really beautiful and your words give the reader an immediate picture. Maybe though don't worry so much about making the poem ryhme as sometimes it ...

hey! I wasn't going to comment, actually because it's so good and I didn't really know waht to say, but no one else has commented which is ridiculous cause you're ...

hey there, well, I liked the rythm of your song but there were ALOT of typos. I'm no sure if it was on purpose but when you post something, try ...

Hey, :) sorry it took a while for you to get a reply for this. I love the idea behind it, one of those poems which works when reflected, but ...

Wow, this was such a beautiful poem! It had a simple rythm which made it pretty to read but also interesting, here are my critiques, the things I liked should ...

hello :) Im the first to comment...well I'm afraid I still have to be quick. I liked your poem, and some of the words you used were descriptive and interesting, ...