Word pallandrome

Your writing is beautiful. Seeing as how this is my first work of yours that I'm reading, I am stunned...but in a good way! I like this poem very much and find nothing wrong with it. The way you formed it, I understand why. As for the phrase "Life save? Save Life" part...at first I was lost and I thought you made a mistake, but then I saw how it fit into your whole poem as a whole. Nice work!

Hahaha, very clever, FlyerS! I don't think it quite works as poetry (it's a bit awkward and stilted, really), so it's definitely not the greatest poem out there, but I love the idea and the fact that you wee able to pull this off as well as you did is pretty fantastic. Kudos to you!

Hey, sorry it took a while for you to get a reply for this.

I love the idea behind it, one of those poems which works when
reflected, but I think you wrote the poem with this too much in
mind....the first stanza really doesn't make much sense and at first
I simply thought your english wasn't strong, only when I finished it
I saw what you were trying to do. It's a good idea and you have
a really beautiful base for a poem, it just needs some touching up, and
maybe if you changed a few of the words and the punctuation then it would
make more sense.
But, besides that, I thought the second stanza (Save life, nothing can help the need
to live) was stunning!!! (Although again, at the end it didn't make sense.)
Work on it a bit and I think it could be amazing!
Hope this helps, you can PM me if you have any questions.
xoxo
T