ToxicAnglerFish

Thank you very much! Also, thank you for pointing out the things that could improve! You were not a stick in the mud :)

Thank you for the review. As mentioned before I wasn't hurt by your past reviews so you don't have to change the way you review pieces on YWS but I'm ...

Sorry if I sounded mean in any way, I just wanted to try to help you out to improve your poems! And no your reviews aren't hurtful, I was just ...

Thank you very much for your criticism! I will consider some of your ideas and see how they can apply to the poem! Also, thank you for loving it so ...

Thank you very much! I'm glad someone picked up on the message I was trying to send since lowkey I was afraid that it might be missed by some! And ...

Thank you very much for the review! I really appreciate it since I wanted to improve this poem more due to liking the ideas in it. And for the rhyme ...

Thank you for the review!

Thank you very much for the review!

I have taken your criticism and re-edited this now :). Read it for yourself!

Thank you very much for this criticism, I will work on my story more :). Also, thank you for taking the time to write such a detailed review!

Thank you!

Thank you so much again! I'm really glad you enjoyed the story and that you interpreted that way since that's what I was going for. And I will make sure ...

Thank you very much for this review of my work! And yeah I didn't want this to be as action packed but just more sad and mysterious really. Again thank ...