ToritheMonster

Hiya Skins. So, I quite enjoyed this. I don't really have many nitpicks, so I'll just give you my overall review. I think this is turning into an interesting story. ...

Oh, thank you! That is the nicest compliment I've ever gotten on YWS. *skips away merrily* *turns back* There's a part 13, if you wan to read it. It's in ...

Lol. Thanks!

purely epic.

Thankee kindly. I've gotten a lot of good advice, thanks for some more!

Okay, thanks. I really wasn't sure what to put this under... it's not romantic, but it's a kiss, so I figured you romance guys would be better at reviewing it. ...

thanks, wiz and kak.

why thank you. I do know that Oros is too old, but I don't want to change it. That's the tone of the story- creepy, not right. It's supposed to ...

Thanks for another awesomefantabulous review! Yeah, I just realized that I never say where this takes place. I should probably do that. Sara's age and home life and grade and ...

Thank you so much! And NO, NEREZZA IS NOT A VAMPIRE. I would literally kill myself if I even considered that. See, in my Word document, all the thoughts were ...

Okay, I woke up this morn brushing my teeth. How does one brush their teeth while asleep? I dunno. This is just weird.

Heys. I'd be happy to review this, but do you mind rating it 18+ first?

Thanks! Yeah, it's supposed to cloudy at first. The first few chapters are like an unsolved puzzle but all the pieces come together. And on my Word doc. version of ...

Thankee. yeah, Nezzy will be introduced by name soon.

Okay. Thanks for the review. Yeah, there's a whole 150 pages before this that might have helped to clear it up... but yeah. Thanks for the (much needed) help!