ToritheMonster

Love that song! It's called Human, by the way, not Are We Human. Overall, interesting piece. You give us some nice characters, an interesting plot. I'd like to know more, ...

Wow, Irie, this was really good! I haven't heard the song, but if it's anything like this story, it should be good. I have a few little nitpicks. "Clad in ...

hey there! So, this is an okay poem. It's clean, easy to read, and to the point. It's best point is the emotion. You feel sad when you read it, ...

Wow! This was an awesome poem!I can't really critique you without repeating what's been said, so I'll just shower you with compliments. I love your style. Most people see the ...

I absolutely loved these poems, especially the second one. It was so light-hearted and funny. And I agree with Tatra, proton pie does sound awesome. I like the first one, ...

Heys! Its-a-me, Dreamy, here to review.Sort of. I don't know why, but I feel like I've read this before. Anyway, it was jolly to read it again. I like this ...

Hi! SO, I kinda loved this a lot. I used to suffer from insomnia (hehe not anymore)and I totally understand this poem. I found it to be quite emotional, and ...

Hey there! So, everyone else has nitpicked this, so I'm not gonna bother. I'll just comment on it in general. So, i rather liked this. I appreciate freeform poetry, like ...

Wow! This is an extremely good piece. I love your style. Some very good points you had are as follows. The first is the emotions you portray. You feel sad ...

Hiya! So, this poem was okay. It started out very nice, and I could almost feel like I was on one of those long, dreaded car rides. But then you ...

Hey there! I'll review you today. Now, I might come across as a bit harsh, but I'm giving you this review to help you, so your writing can grow. To ...

Hey there!so, I really liked this. I just have a few nitpicks, in red: I cannot think of a time when I did not hate ; when people only truly ...

Hey! So, this was a really nice piece. You really did a great job, and no nitpicks really jumped out at me. I did have a small problem with your ...

Hey, Dreamy here to do a review! Okay, to be honest, this poem was extremely confusing. It's very jumpy, and the added words of "thy and thou" don't help much ...

I woke up in a hospital bed. The sheets felt scratchy against my skin, as though they had been washed one time too many. Every part of my body felt ...