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  • Poetry » Science Fiction, Dramatic Re: Time Travel

    I know, don't worry. It's just a quote :P.

    Jul 23, 2014
  • Poetry » Science Fiction, Dramatic Re: Time Travel

    This happened when a person met himself/herself in the past (that's why I named it Time Travel) and thinks it's her/his reflection but it's in fact the same living person ...

    Jul 23, 2014
  • Poetry » Science Fiction, Dramatic Re: Time Travel

    "If nobody hates you, you're doing something wrong." ;)

    Jul 22, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Homewrecker, Homewrecked

    "I pray to the painted sunset, paper thin veil to hide the splintered fist-shape in the wooden door." What an awesome imagery!

    Jul 21, 2014
  • Poetry » Science Fiction, Dramatic Re: Time Travel

    Thank you! :)

    Jul 21, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: heavy metal

    No, I think I get it :) Thank you for the poem!

    Jul 20, 2014
  • Poetry » Science Fiction, Dramatic Re: Time Travel

    Thanks for the review, but I don't think about changing it nor I think it requires more work. There is no rule about poetry where it says that a poem ...

    Jul 20, 2014
  • Poetry » Science Fiction, Dramatic Re: Time Travel

    You probably wrote the last thing because you wanted to fill your review with more words (I don't blame you because I do the same thing :D), because combining the ...

    Jul 20, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Look for the Sun (4 poems in 1)

    Hey there! I don't have much to say because ChipsMcCoy already said what was on my mind. Especially about the word "when". All I have to say is that your ...

    Jul 19, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Lawn Warfare

    Of course I won't give up, it was just a joke. I wanted to make a strong compliment :).

    Jul 18, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Lawn Warfare

    I've read two of your poems today and all I can say is that you're one of the most talented poets here. You make me wanna give up writing. Keep ...

    Jul 18, 2014
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Other Re: Mermaid

    Same here, it's not a tragedy :D

    Jul 18, 2014
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Other Re: Mermaid

    Thanks for the review and your lovely interpretation :D. I'm glad I made someone feel like this!

    Jul 18, 2014
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Other Re: Mermaid

    Well if you like that spiritual/romantic concept, I suggest you to review this:

    Jul 18, 2014
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Other Re: Mermaid

    IamTraunt explained :D

    Jul 18, 2014


He began to wonder why he had felt uneasy at all. It was like a man wondering in broad daylight why a dream had appeared so terrible to him at night.
— Chinua Achebe, Things Fall Apart