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Re: I Told You So
This was so cute. The dream at the beginning was mislead in a positive way, it made me think the story was going to be told from a child's perspective, ...
Feb 16, 2016 -
Re: Smoke and Nails
Hi! I know you posted this almost two weeks ago, but I just found it. Sorry! In all, this was a very good short work. Honestly, I had a bit ...
Feb 16, 2016 -
Re: Life is what you make it
Wow! I really really like the "If life is" setup at the beginning of each line. Because I'm kind of a poetry dummy, I have to read poems out loud ...
Feb 15, 2016 -
Re: Dead Girl: Chapter One
I liked this piece. First of all, the beginning had a rather nice catch to it, and I like the concept of dying and coming back to life. I admit ...
Oct 28, 2014 -
Re: Dear Supportive Women,
I. Love. This. Seriously, I started reading this apprehensively, but as I got farther into it, it began to call to me more. Maybe it's because I can relate to ...
Oct 27, 2014 -
Re: Colorless
I thought this story was adorable, frankly. There were a few grammatical errors, but if you read over the whole thing just once, that can be corrected, no big deal. ...
Oct 26, 2014