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TommySneak

TommySneak

  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Dramatic Re: Confines I

    This is an incredibly powerful piece! Your diction really gives off the sense of intense distress your character is obviously going through, and it's as if I can feel myself ...

    May 14, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: i never lernd to spel good

    Well I must say, this is one of the most riveting, heart-wrenching poems I have read in an EXCEPTIONALLY long time. Usually, I don't stop to review, just read and ...

    Aug 9, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, General Re: The Madness of Mr Meretrine: Chapter 2, Part 1

    This is absolutely fantastic. I really don't have much in the way of criticisms to offer, but one thing I did notice is that your flow, although excellent throughout, has ...

    Dec 30, 2012
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Speak Louder (Wake up please)

    Hi, Spark! My name is TommySneak, but I'm pretty sure that wasn't to hard to decipher considering the splendid website assigns each member a chance to customize their name, which ...

    Jan 20, 2012
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Love terrifies me.

    Most would find this poem "choppy", or "basic", but your simplistic style makes each point stand out profoundly, and pack exponential meaning, as if each stanza contained thousands of smaller ...

    Nov 30, 2011
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: The Casualties of War

    I'm not going to go into much detail at the moment, because I am short on time, but this, overall, is a stalwart piece, worthy of anyone's attention. Your writing ...

    Nov 30, 2011


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