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now I like this poem as I have had troubles with my dad in the past and he pile son an awful lot of pressure on me to do well ...

I thought this was really nice, there were a few typo's but they were just simple typing mistakes and am not going to criticize for that. I like the way ...

yeah I loved this story, it has great potential and it already sinks in a storyline that will make me want to read it through till the end. The only ...

I met his stare, hating and defying his silent condescension. But, after a long moment, I was the one to drop my gaze. is it correct to start a sentence ...

I thought the MC was very interesting and a good character to base the story around. His sense of humour and his lack of caring what other people thought brought ...

He had been shot in the side, but with a glancing blow. He would make it. His squad fell in behind him. I had relaxed my guard only to hear ...