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No problem! I'm glad you didn't take it personally. :)

Awww, you're too nice :)

Thanks! :)

Thank you very much :)

Anytime :)

I think it might make more sense now :)

I think it might make more sense now :)

Thank you so much! I'm really touched :)

Thanks!

Thank you! :)

Hey! Thanks for the review! I totally see your point about punctuation. I had intended each line to be single spaced, with an extra space between each verse, but I ...

Thanks so much for the review! I am going to say that this is actually a ch%u014Dka, which is an 8th-14th century style of Japanese poetry that, similar to haiku, ...

So sorry, I don't know why this submitted again as a comment.

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This is a fantastic poem! It seems so sad to me, but in a way that's relatable, because this is a situation faced by people all over our society. This ...

Thanks so much for the reviews! :)