Toboldlygo

This is a fantastic piece, but it does need some cleaning. I was very confused by a great deal of it. I think at the very least, it needs to ...

Hi there! Rose here for a review! :) First off, I really love this poem! Having had several online friendships myself through various programs and being a fan of online ...

Wow, this is really something! I have some nitpicky things, first. PLEASE capitalize and punctuate! It really just makes it nicer and easier to read that way. Have a comma ...

Wow! This is really good! I just have a few comments that I'm going to try to run through quickly. :) 1) Your lines are very short. When reading it, ...

Hi! Toboldlygo, here to review! :) I really like this piece, it's creative and different from much of what I see here. Good job, bonus pointes for that! :) A ...

Good job, Knight Teen! I know you didn't have time to edit it or fix it because of the 15 minute limit, but I think you should try to clean ...

Wow, that's so heartfelt and intense! I really like it! It's a great thing for people who are or have a loved one who is struggling with addictions. "I remember ...

Oh my gosh that's the most horribly beautiful thing I've ever read! I literally cried as I read it! (And I'm seriously not misusing the word "literally".) And I know ...

Hi! So I'm with Deadman on this one. It's an awesome poem, but the spacing feels a little off. But the formatting is fantastic, and it has SO MUCH emotion! ...

Great job! This is seriously intense writing, I honestly don't know what to think of it yet. It's so dark and horrible, but it's really gotten my attention. It's very ...

This is a fascinating poem! I like how you're reaching out to find abstract, bizarre random things and putting them into a more concrete context. But, there are a few ...

Ok, so I guess that was a test. But you know what you can do is go to your Publishing Center and edit this work. You can put your entire ...

Wow! This is great! I really like it. There are a few things I'd like to mention before I review. First, I notice this is chapter 3, but can't find ...

Wow, this is impressive! I like how you portray the idea of two people in love but unable to get to each other without actually saying so. It takes real ...

Hi! I really like this story, it's great! Here's my only issue with it: it doesn't finish! I think maybe you were intending to save it as a draft and ...