TobilloTheTinyTurtle

Hey! Let me start off with...wow. It took me a moment to understand fully, but once I did, everything just hits so close to home. I love the imagery and ...

Hey! First off, I just want to say how absolutely adorable and wholesome this is. Happier, brighter poetry like this is always nice and brings a smile to people's faces ...

First off, I want to say how clear the message and emotion are in this one, so kudos! However, in the first stanza, you seem to describe your father in ...

I appreciated the formatting towards the end, it really added something to the poem as a whole. The different descriptions of the lights put a certain image in my head. ...