Tizpi

This is a very powerful piece, a powerful and enjoyable one. I am not Christian, personally, but found this piece disturbingly familiar. Religion, despite it's original intention, is home to ...

From a first glance, I notice no seperation of paragraphs. When I start a new paragraph, I usually move to the next line. When you seperate each paragraph the entire ...

I'm totally confused... Is this just a part of something bigger? It seems a little random and bizarre. Well anyways, on to the review. Your characters seem dull and boring. ...

This story was quite interesting. The summary at the top hooked me in right away just because of the way you characterized Ursula as a 'mysterious' women. First thing I ...

I'm not much into realistic fiction and romance. . . at all. This really didn't give me much interest mostly because of that. The plot was O.K but, it was ...

(Apparently it's not counting my posts here as a review. Even if i check the review box. So i'm going to test this one more time...) Hey there! So far, ...

Very interesting story here. I loved it! A few things could be changed though. You seem to use very long paragraphs. That middle one seems really long and probably could ...