Titan4ever

Hey! I really liked it, but I want to know more about the characters, like, how long has he had his"gift", and how he got his "gift. I would also ...

I really liked it, and I can't wait to read more. One thing I noticed didn't look right, to me anyways, was The light was on only three times a ...

I really liked your story! The twins seem so realistic, especially Alex. I know tons of girls (and guys)that are very picky about their nicknames. I'm pretty sure that a ...

Hey! This is not something that I normally would read, but I kept reading till the end. You truly are a good writer. I noticed one thing though. With sucked ...

Hey! I really liked it! Manly, I just noticed grammar/spelling/sentence structure isuues. Tommy was never allowed to play outside, too dangerous, Mum always said. It should be Tommy was never ...

Hey! I thought the story was great, and kind of ended just when things got to the climax. I noticed a couple of typos though. He knew that sitting in ...

Hey Mikko! I thought your story was a good start. Two things popped out at me. aged only of four months. I think you should get rid of the of. ...

I really liked this chapter! It get's the reader hooked, and reading to the end. The only thing that caught my eye was this : ‘Them’..?’ I think it should ...

I really like it! It was a great addition to the writing you did in chapter one. Only one thing I noticed. “Pleasure to meet you-,” he glanced at the ...

I think this is a really good start. There were only two problems that caught my mind. ‘Agree,’ he mumbles. It might just be a typo, but I think the ...

I really liked your writing a lot. I also liked how the main character went from one girl to another. I also liked how Carlos compared everything to mid-evil times. ...

This story sounds very good so far. I only noticed one thing, t was but one afternoon that a young unicorn was born into the darkness, her mother was one ...

This story is really good, and there are only a couple things that confused me. Anyway, my mom got pregnant with me when she was eighteen; it just so happens ...

I think that the title Face(less) book would work well with what you've written so far. You might want to edit the following. Myspace,facebook,Twitter,Hi5, Orkut, and dozen of others mainstream ...

The story is great! You captured my attention and held it to the very end. I also like all of the little details that you added to make the story ...