TinyDancer

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Hey! Always good to have your wonderful advice :) This is a first draft, so I'm super excited that you like it as much as you do without any revisions ...

Hi thank you for your opinion. I think that if you didn't add your own words, and just let the structure of the poem guide you to what line you're ...

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Thanks so much for the suggestions! I'll keep them all in mind when editing. :)

Thanks so much for all your help. Just to clear up confusion though, I used the capitals to reference another poem so I'll probably keep them in there. Thanks so ...

Thank you so much for your helpful insights! I'm currently revising and considering all your suggestions :)

Thank you so much. This was an experiment for me so I appreciate any input you have. I hope you have a wonderful holiday!

Thanks for your suggestions. I agree with you and will try to rework some things.

Thank you for your kind comment :) I'm glad you liked it.

Wow what an unlikely place to meet a fellow beach-goer :) It's always great when someone "gets it" ya know? Thanks for your sweet comment.

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