TinyDancer

Lovely poem. So true! I've seen it happen so many times. There's not much more to say than what others above me have already said (other than I'm glad that ...

This was horrifically, saddeningly true. What a piece. Great job capturing the sensory images and emotion of the scenario. This was inspiring and touching, even though the end was sad. ...

Wait!!!! Don't get rid of the bird story. I thought Harris was supposed to be Kelly and the little ants that ate Kelly were supposed to be like that woman ...

This was lovely. I really felt the emotions you were trying to convey. These people were realistic and thus likeable. There were a few grammatical errors here and there, but ...

This was so sweet! I like the uplifting message. Its really awesome that you were able to complete this in 15 minutes! Great job! I don't really see any mistakes ...

Super cute poem :) it makes me think of a certain bedtime story that my mother used to read me when I was little. Don't ask me why, it just ...

Hey there- I love this :) (as usual haha) I was expecting her to wake up next to Jonah and was sad that she didn't, but I know the effect ...

This was good. Great concept, and you displayed your stanzas well. I felt a little detached emotionally though (until the last stanza). Maybe you could put some more emotional words ...

Hey there, me again! I can't seem to stay away from your pieces :) Once I grasped the concept of what this piece was about, I read it again with ...

Hey- Great post. I though it was really cute and charming. I can't help but feel as though you could take this farther :) All of the grammar and spelling ...

This was beautiful :) I fell in love with the poetic voice and you conveyed the emotion perfectly and effortlessly. Great job :) ~Jess

Ok, so here's the thing- You have talent. I saw it in the other piece of yours that I reviewed :) I was ok with this piece. I'm not a ...

This was really sweet and I loved the abruptness of it. You aesthetically managed to be assertive and tender at the same time. The flow was nice although I think ...

Very moving. I like how the reader is taken through a vast array of beautiful imagery until the final main point that explains what the imagery was trying to convey. ...

This was lovely and uplifting to read. Quite hopeful too. I only noticed one spelling error- "Knifes" should be "knives" but that's it! Other than that, it was gorgeous and ...