Tinalove

I think your poem here is very well written. For this being an early work as you dont write poetry, Id say you did acceptionally well. I dont think you ...

I love the passion you have here but there are some things I would change. Since you started off in a four stanza form and continued it, you should stick ...

I personally think that this poem is beautiful. I find no faults in this. Poems dont necessarily have to rhyme to be considered poetry and ending stanzas with the same ...