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Re: Ruptured Mind 2 (Ever-changing Title)
Man, your reviews are fuel for a writer.
Jul 30, 2015 -
Re: Ruptured Mind 1.2 (Ever-changing Title)
Woah. You have no idea how happy this makes me.
Jul 29, 2015 -
Re: Ruptured Mind 1.2 (Ever-changing Title)
... Uh-oh, you spotted a very important thing I need to change. xDD That bit in the beginning, where they parked at the same place. Definitely needs to be changed. ...
Jul 29, 2015 -
Re: Ruptured Mind 1.2 (Ever-changing Title)
THANK YOU
Jul 27, 2015 -
Re: Ruptured Mind 1.1 (Ever-changing Title)
HEY Thank you for reviewing this piece for me! I feel so special now. :') And you know what? Even when you don't find anything "wrong" with the piece, all ...
Jul 27, 2015 -
Re: Ruptured Mind 1.2 (Ever-changing Title)
Thank you so much for this!
Jul 26, 2015 -
Re: Ruptured Mind 1.1 (Ever-changing Title)
Thanks for your review, Pretzel! I know this isn't my best writing, but also remember something - this is a first draft. And it's also the very first time that ...
Jul 26, 2015 -
Re: Ruptured Mind 1.1 (Ever-changing Title)
YAY You're here!
Jul 26, 2015 -
Re: Ruptured Mind 1.2 (Ever-changing Title)
Thank you for the review! It helped me a lot, and it was aaahmazing for your second review.
Jul 26, 2015 -
Re: Unbreakable
You're a lyrical genius. This was perfect.
Jul 24, 2015 -
Re: Ruptured Mind 1.1 (Ever-changing Title)
Yay! It's Rose. Thank you for this review - it helps me so much. Like all of them do. ;) To be honest, there are so many things changing per ...
Jul 24, 2015 -
Re: Ruptured Mind 1.1 (Ever-changing Title)
Thank you for the review! It was very helpful, and is going to help me tons with the future chapters. As for why all the questions... just me trying to ...
Jul 21, 2015 -
Re: Ruptured Mind 1.1 (Ever-changing Title)
Thank you for your review! And, that makes complete sense. Yeah, it does slow down near the end there. I'll work on giving it more life and action when I ...
Jul 20, 2015 -
Re: #Homophobe
Unfortunately, Strange has a point. There will never be a time when every knee bends to Him. But we should pray for it, anyway.
Jul 1, 2015 -
Re: if i were to write a poem, i would write it about cutting.
This is beautiful
Jun 23, 2015
